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Okay.
I'm enjoying the fun challenge (and 'challenge' is definitely the word) of writing an orgy. I've never done this before, so I'm a bit... uncertain of how to do it. Which is why I'm posting. Any suggests would be appreciated.
Anyway.
Warning: The story is a piece of discworld fanfiction (Moria, I can see you looking disgusted from here). As such, if any of you really don't want to know, kindly don't look...
For those of you who do want to know, however, the premis is this:
Mal and Polly (who are not a couple at this point) are in Bonk, Uberwald, and have been given two days leave by their boss, as well as a flyer (by Lady Margolotta) for the gay-mixer bar 'Anemone'.
They go, they meet a variety of female (and aproximately human-shaped, at least most of the time) discworld characters, some of whom they already know, or at least have met (in canon) and others of whom they already know according to my ficverse (at least as it works up until the official end of the actual book).
If that makes any sense.
Some of them, of course, they don't know at all, but that will change fairly quickly.
Everyone hits it off remarkably well, including the staff and the live band (called "Where the Bee Sucks", after a sonnet by Hwel, the wordsmith).
At closing time, Lady Margolotta (who gave the girls the flyer in the first place) invites everyone back to her in-town estate (not the castle, which is just outside of town. The house only has four floors, not counting the cellars). Of course, everyone goes.
There has already been one quicky behind the bar (although technically it's probably closer to three quickies behind the bar, but only one of them was discussed, even in incomplete detail) and another one (with a lot mor detail) in a shadowed alcove during a (still-on-going) game of 'sardines'.
Which brings me to the beginning of page 13, and the end of what I've written so far.
I am edging, slowly but surely, towards the actual group sex part of the orgy!fic.
I confess, I'm a little nervous.
The story is written in third-person-limitted, so I've already got one 'she' to deal with when I'm just inside the protagonist's head.
I'm about to add something like nineteen more.
Urk.
I'm not sure how this is going to turn out.
So there you have it.
Suggestions or, hell, questions, are totally welcome. :-)
- TTFN,
- Amazon.
I'm enjoying the fun challenge (and 'challenge' is definitely the word) of writing an orgy. I've never done this before, so I'm a bit... uncertain of how to do it. Which is why I'm posting. Any suggests would be appreciated.
Anyway.
Warning: The story is a piece of discworld fanfiction (Moria, I can see you looking disgusted from here). As such, if any of you really don't want to know, kindly don't look...
For those of you who do want to know, however, the premis is this:
Mal and Polly (who are not a couple at this point) are in Bonk, Uberwald, and have been given two days leave by their boss, as well as a flyer (by Lady Margolotta) for the gay-mixer bar 'Anemone'.
They go, they meet a variety of female (and aproximately human-shaped, at least most of the time) discworld characters, some of whom they already know, or at least have met (in canon) and others of whom they already know according to my ficverse (at least as it works up until the official end of the actual book).
If that makes any sense.
Some of them, of course, they don't know at all, but that will change fairly quickly.
Everyone hits it off remarkably well, including the staff and the live band (called "Where the Bee Sucks", after a sonnet by Hwel, the wordsmith).
At closing time, Lady Margolotta (who gave the girls the flyer in the first place) invites everyone back to her in-town estate (not the castle, which is just outside of town. The house only has four floors, not counting the cellars). Of course, everyone goes.
There has already been one quicky behind the bar (although technically it's probably closer to three quickies behind the bar, but only one of them was discussed, even in incomplete detail) and another one (with a lot mor detail) in a shadowed alcove during a (still-on-going) game of 'sardines'.
Which brings me to the beginning of page 13, and the end of what I've written so far.
I am edging, slowly but surely, towards the actual group sex part of the orgy!fic.
I confess, I'm a little nervous.
The story is written in third-person-limitted, so I've already got one 'she' to deal with when I'm just inside the protagonist's head.
I'm about to add something like nineteen more.
Urk.
I'm not sure how this is going to turn out.
So there you have it.
Suggestions or, hell, questions, are totally welcome. :-)
- TTFN,
- Amazon.
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