Latin Translation?

People who can read Latin (Ladymondegreen, I'm looking at you):

Is this:

Ave,
Ave, Sanctus Matris quod Misericordia et Diligo,
Quod Coeli et Terra Regina.
Sanctus Dea,
Domina Plurimus Carus,
Nos Saluto Vos in Diligo quod Tripudium[1]

... Proper Latin (with all the word-endings and word-orders correct)?
If not, what do I need to do to make it so? :-)


Help? :-D

I'll see people in a few hours at the Slasher's lunch thing. :-)

Back to reading about BDSM. :-)


- TTFN,
- Amazon. :-)


[1] What I want to say:
Hail,
Hail Holy Mother of Mercy and Love,
Queen of Heaven and Earth.
Holy Goddess,
Lady Most Beloved,
We Greet You in Love and Joy.