Okay, Draft Three of Meeting Karen is up at my fic journal.
I've worked out some of the holes (like where to put the latex gloves on, and the bit where I didn't realize you had to warm up the skin before you started flogging anyone in earnest) and fixed some (hopefully most) of the transitions.
If anyone would care to check it out and beta it, that would be awesome. :-)
In other news: I used my 'soft coeur' massage bar (picked up yesterday at Lush) to work on Paul's back (and everywhere else). I think I prefer the 'mange too' one, but 'soft coeur' isn't bad. :-)
Tonight we're going out for dinner - at the Oak, rather than at Wild Wings, as he's a bit worried about whether the food at WW would make him sick. That's fair enough. :-)
I kinda wanna go to sleep.
All that being said:
The laundry is done
The groceries are bought and put away
The story is edited
The bath has been had
Everything is going according to plan. :-)
I've worked out some of the holes (like where to put the latex gloves on, and the bit where I didn't realize you had to warm up the skin before you started flogging anyone in earnest) and fixed some (hopefully most) of the transitions.
If anyone would care to check it out and beta it, that would be awesome. :-)
In other news: I used my 'soft coeur' massage bar (picked up yesterday at Lush) to work on Paul's back (and everywhere else). I think I prefer the 'mange too' one, but 'soft coeur' isn't bad. :-)
Tonight we're going out for dinner - at the Oak, rather than at Wild Wings, as he's a bit worried about whether the food at WW would make him sick. That's fair enough. :-)
I kinda wanna go to sleep.
All that being said:
The laundry is done
The groceries are bought and put away
The story is edited
The bath has been had
Everything is going according to plan. :-)
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